This work does not reflect your ability and it needs to be substantially revised. The magazine covers should have analysis and comparison to show you can identify the conventions you will be trying to replicate in your own work.
The moodboard is a good collection of the right genre of magazines - but you need to add comment and analysis to tell me what genre features stand out to you. what are the broad similarities and what are the striking differences on any individual covers?
Your target audience simply tries to ridicule the task. It needs to be done again with a serious and accurate tone. this is not pass grade work.
Your titles are imaginative and appropriate but for a Merit you need to comment on each one, saying why it might be a good or suitable title for this genre of magazine.
Your fonts have not come out on your blog because they are not supported by Scribd. You need to display the slide on screen, take a screengrab, paste the screengrab into Photoshop (crop if necessary) and save it as a jpg file. you can now load the jpg file straight on to your blog.
You layout looks professional although some conventions (eg date, price, puff, skyline, gutterline) are missing. You need to add a second layout in order to be able to write some comments comparing the two and explaining which one would be best.
This work does not reflect your ability and it needs to be substantially revised.
ReplyDeleteThe magazine covers should have analysis and comparison to show you can identify the conventions you will be trying to replicate in your own work.
The moodboard is a good collection of the right genre of magazines - but you need to add comment and analysis to tell me what genre features stand out to you. what are the broad similarities and what are the striking differences on any individual covers?
Your target audience simply tries to ridicule the task. It needs to be done again with a serious and accurate tone. this is not pass grade work.
Your titles are imaginative and appropriate but for a Merit you need to comment on each one, saying why it might be a good or suitable title for this genre of magazine.
Your fonts have not come out on your blog because they are not supported by Scribd. You need to display the slide on screen, take a screengrab, paste the screengrab into Photoshop (crop if necessary) and save it as a jpg file. you can now load the jpg file straight on to your blog.
You layout looks professional although some conventions (eg date, price, puff, skyline, gutterline) are missing. You need to add a second layout in order to be able to write some comments comparing the two and explaining which one would be best.